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Tokyo – Concrete jungle
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I dont know if this is good or bad…..Let me know.
Just a maze of concrete. Looks chlostrophobic….
Taken from Tokyo tower, Japan.
Its more of a holiday snap “remember this place” kind of shot for me. there isn’t really any focus point to the picture and if you hadn’t said Tokyo I’d have no idea where it is .. I hope thats not too hard a critique, its not meant to be.. Its just my humble oppinion.
Lorraine
Yep you wouldnt know it was Tokyo. But I like it, for me it the urban jungle.
Confusing, all the same etc… If thats what you were trying to show, it works for me.
But can see LoGills point of view also on it.Have you other Tokyo pics ?
I think it needs something distinctive about it…As it stands, there’s just city.
Ye gotta make it pop, maybe if you were able to make the buildings stand out against something…or lie down on the road and shoot upwards?
I think it would have been nicer if it wasn’t such a hazy day when you took it. Everything in it feels kind of muted and faded, as if the picture had been laying out in the sun for a week.
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